Well this is certainly something.
I feel like I watched a visual summary of every broken family in the United States, but as fish.
Well this is certainly something.
I feel like I watched a visual summary of every broken family in the United States, but as fish.
It's not bad, but I can tell that you're still a little new to animation (I think?)
This shows promise. You created a coherent plot and landed a joke, and that definitely counts for something. I'd love to see more of this stuff as you develop your animation skills.
Keep aiming higher, you have a lot of potential.
Yeah 1 year in.
Cyclops is getting a little old to be training like this.
I found the animation interesting, but a little simplistic? It could definitely do with some improved laser animations. I think you overall did a fairly good job on creating realistic body movement for Cyclops at least.
I think the enemy models were a little lazy, they looked a lot like Space Marine models from Starcraft.
Overall it wasn't terrible but it could be better.
Thanks for the honest feedback. I'll add a bit more detail in areas that I can.
This is great. Good combination of unique art style and surreality.
Who knew the Ear Worm would be such a great symbiotic host?
cheers, yeah we should all get worms
Gorgeous animation. This 3D is extremely impressive.
I especially love how you nailed the glass shine on their helmets.
I really love your take on abstractionism. At least I think that's what this?
Bits of abstractionism and absurdism. Gorgeous stuff.
You've basically crafted a completely different reality and gotten us all engaged in it.
Spectacular. So many memories, perfectly replicated through artistic genius.
I just knew, I KNEW where this was heading before it even reached the end.
Pretty well animated.
It was pretty well written until it got to "triple monitor setup" and I was like 'yeah this isn't remotely a real story.'
this is autobiographical...
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