I'm definitely going to give you points for originality.
I'm not entirely sure how to feel about the video overall.
I'm definitely going to give you points for originality.
I'm not entirely sure how to feel about the video overall.
This is kind of neat. Animation looks decently fluid, it's mildly entertaining.
I might have rated higher but the extremely loud screaming felt like overkill.
Decent.
Yeah in hindsight I probably should have lowered the volume on the scream, either way thanks!
I can tell some effort went into this, but other than the music it's not especially impressive.
I will give you some serious credit on creating interesting backgrounds. You did great with that.
But your characters look like jagged shapes and detract from the animation because of it.
Great music, animation could really be better. But seriously, good job on the backgrounds.
Ok thanks!!
Cute!
Very well made, but the eyes kind of freak me out. Intentional?
Darn, usually I do try to make the eyes on my characters kinda unsettling but that was not the intention here
Without any actual animation or at least fill-in sketches, it feels terribly unfinished and difficult to enjoy.
I would have been fine if the animation had some kind of fill-in image that wasn't a blank white screen.
Yeah I haven’t finished it yet so thats why I left the screen blank but I will fix that, also thanks for the response
Wow, this is gorgeous!
Nice smooth transitions between scenes, fluid looking animation with relaxing filter effects, and overall a pretty enjoyable teaser(?) for your future content. I like it.
I like the video. It has good substance, and it definitely has a solid subject matter.
However, I really couldn't rate it higher because of the editing. This video has WAY too many random jump-cuts/transitions for no discernible reason. I feel like this is unnecessary and distracting, taking away attention from what would otherwise be a pretty solid video.
Honestly, that's a pretty great score considering your valid criticism. I think the earlier half of the video definitely lays the transitions on thick. Once I finish the Smash Fighter overviews for the sake of consistency, I think I'll be reviewing how I tackle the visuals of these videos since this isn't the first time I've heard this kind of impression. It's kind of funny that the aspect that detracts from the video for folks that share your opinion is where 90% of the work is put in! Haha
It's a start, but the lack of sound and the unsteady animation makes it a little difficult to enjoy.
I'm not trying to put you down, I think you could create something really good with even more time. I'm just not quite sure that enough time was put into this to count as much more than a test animation.
At least it conveys a story that's easy to follow. I definitely give you props for that.
Keep working at it, okay?
Ok! also its fine im just a beginner at animations
Short and sweet. Nicely animated.
Good use of transitions and a solid reference.
You did good on this.
Not really my kind of thing but I cannot deny the high production value of what I'm seeing.
I get the feeling you're about to get a lot of attention on Newgrounds.
Hey thanks! I appreciate that!
I have no claim to fame unless playing a lot of Death Stranding counts.
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