DreamHollow's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Captain wham Mr blue bomb]

It's not bad, but I can tell that you're still a little new to animation (I think?)

This shows promise. You created a coherent plot and landed a joke, and that definitely counts for something. I'd love to see more of this stuff as you develop your animation skills.

Keep aiming higher, you have a lot of potential.

CrappyMappy responds:

Yeah 1 year in.

[The Danger Room]

Cyclops is getting a little old to be training like this.

I found the animation interesting, but a little simplistic? It could definitely do with some improved laser animations. I think you overall did a fairly good job on creating realistic body movement for Cyclops at least.

I think the enemy models were a little lazy, they looked a lot like Space Marine models from Starcraft.

Overall it wasn't terrible but it could be better.

jacmedia responds:

Thanks for the honest feedback. I'll add a bit more detail in areas that I can.

[Orla's Ear Worm]

This is great. Good combination of unique art style and surreality.

Who knew the Ear Worm would be such a great symbiotic host?

AntonM responds:

cheers, yeah we should all get worms

[Anon Goes to McDonalds - /b/ - 4chan Greentext]

I just knew, I KNEW where this was heading before it even reached the end.

Pretty well animated.

It was pretty well written until it got to "triple monitor setup" and I was like 'yeah this isn't remotely a real story.'

WesMakowski responds:

this is autobiographical...

[bakset boll]

Nice animation.

Short, simple joke, relatively smooth for such a brief animation.

I like it. Keep up the good work.

hoopyloos responds:

Thank you!

[Meet Wally]

I really like it, but I suppose we will never know why he declined to have his wishes...

UrsinDaPerson responds:

Too intimidating man, make like Wally and stomp away those scary situations!

[Musk]

Spooky twist ending.

I like that despite the characters not saying anything, it tells a whole story.

FallingGiants responds:

Thank you!! I hope to get better with sound editing, and have talking in my next cartoon.

[cat allergies]

Very well animated.

Honestly this is so smooth, I can't wait to see the finished animation.

It really gives me those anime vibes.

ChipsGoWOAH responds:

thank you im glad you think its smooth, its like 30 fps but most of it is animated on 4's lol
also this is as far as im taking this animation i didnt feel like cleaning it, i just wanna move on, i wasnt even planning on giving it sound but some friends suggested i should.